When Time Slowed Down
I recorded myself telling these near death stories and then fed the transcript to AI. Using a custom series of prompts from my latest book, it used my words to create a cautionary tale that is true to my own unique voice.
I’ve had a couple of experiences in my life where everything suddenly shifted… where time slowed down and something inside me just took over. They happened years apart, in completely different situations, but they both taught me the same thing: when survival is on the line, the human brain can do remarkable things.
The first one happened when I was still at UBC, driving my old 1962 Dodge Dart. That car was a piece of work. My dad bought it for me for $200 after it had been rammed by a garbage truck. It had a slant-6 engine that just ran forever and a push-button automatic transmission, which I thought was the cat’s meow. That car got me everywhere… out to the field sites for my thesis, around the city, back and forth to the mountains. It was reliable, until the day it wasn’t.
I’d been out at the beach near Tsawwassen doing fieldwork with my friend Dan. We were working on our undergrad thesis about the feeding calls of glaucous-winged seagulls. We would set up a speaker system running off the car battery and drive out to various spots to play the recordings and count how many gulls showed up. These spots usually involved a city dump with lots of resident seagulls. It was good science, but it was also a bit of an adventure.
One time, we took the Dart out onto this sandy beach with small dunes. The sand turned out to be way too loose, and we got bogged down. We actually had to build a set of tracks out of driftwood… spaced exactly the width of the tires… and I drove the car out along those makeshift rails. It worked, but in the process, I pushed too hard on the emergency brake and the cable snapped. So after that, I didn’t have an emergency brake. I figured I’d get it fixed eventually. I just didn’t realize how soon I’d need it.
A few days later, I was driving home from UBC, heading down E 12th Avenue toward Kingsway. It was a busy afternoon. Traffic was heavy. I came up to the intersection and there was a red light. All the cars were stopped ahead of me, lined up and waiting.
I pushed on the brake.
Nothing.
I pushed again. Still nothing. No resistance. No slowing. The pedal just went to the floor.
And that’s when everything changed.
It was the most amazing sensation. Time didn’t speed up… it slowed way down. I was still moving, still rolling toward that line of stopped cars, but I could see everything with perfect clarity. My mind was working fast, but the world around me felt like it was moving through honey.
I remember thinking, *I can’t crash into those cars.* That was the first decision. I looked to the right and saw a street lamp pole on the sidewalk. I thought, *I could aim for that.* But as I got closer, I realized I could just barely squeeze past it if I went up onto the sidewalk.
I must have seen that there were no pedestrians, because what I did next would have been insane otherwise. I steered up onto the sidewalk, threaded the car past the pole, turned right onto Kingsway, and rubbed my tires hard against the curb until the car came to a stop.
I sat there for a moment, shaking. I couldn’t believe what had just happened. I hadn’t crashed. I hadn’t hit anyone. I hadn’t killed anyone. It all felt surreal.
Then I got out of the car, still trembling, and there were these kids sitting at the bus stop. They looked at me and said, “Hey, you can’t stop there. That’s a bus stop.”
I just stared at them. I couldn’t believe it. That was the last thing I was worried about. I’d just survived a near-death experience, and these kids were complaining that I’d pulled over in the bus stop.
I don’t remember what I said to them. Something like, “Don’t bother me. I just barely made it around that corner.” I was too shaken to care.
But what stuck with me wasn’t the kids or the broken brake… it was that moment when time slowed down. When my mind shifted into a different mode and I could suddenly see options I wouldn’t have noticed otherwise. It was like a switch flipped, and survival took over.
The second time it happened was a year or two later, after I’d started working at Glacier National Park. By then, I’d done a lot of scrambling in the mountains… nothing too technical, no scaling mountain peaks using hardware. I didn’t like the idea of hanging off bits of metal banged into cracks in the rock. But I was comfortable scrambling up slopes and ridges, and I’d done enough of it that I felt pretty confident.
One day, I was out with a group… three or four of us, I think. We were exploring this little canyon, just walking and scrambling our way up. We got to a point where there was a sheer cliff blocking our path. I had a rope with me, and I thought, *Well, I’ll just go up this cliff and then drop the rope down so the others can follow.*
It seemed like a reasonable idea at the time.
I started climbing. The first part wasn’t too bad… good handholds, solid footholds. I got up maybe 20 or 30 feet, and then suddenly, I ran out of options. There were no more handholds I could see. The rock just went smooth above me.
I stopped and looked down.
That’s when it hit me. I was way too high. If I fell, I’d land on the rocks below, and it would be bad. Really bad. Maybe even fatal.
And if you’ve ever climbed anything, you know that coming down is a lot harder than going up. You can’t see where your feet are going. The holds you used on the way up are harder to find when you’re descending. I was stuck.
My toes were balanced on these tiny little ledges… half an inch, maybe less. My legs were straining to hold my weight, and then they started to shake. Not just a little tremor… my whole legs were shaking, and I thought, *Holy hell, I’m going to shake right off these footholds.*
I couldn’t hold it. The strain was too much.
And then, just like with the car, something switched.
It was like a flip went off in my brain. I realized I either did something right now, or I was going to die.
And all of a sudden, the same cliff transformed in front of me. I could see handholds and footholds I hadn’t noticed before. My mind cleared. Time slowed down again, and I could see exactly what I needed to do… reach here, step there, push up, move fast.
I scrambled up that cliff like a monkey. I didn’t think about it. I just moved. And in seconds, I was over the top, standing on solid ground, breathing hard and shaking all over again.
I couldn’t believe it. The same cliff that had seemed impossible just moments before had suddenly given me a path. It was the exact same experience as the car—time slowed, clarity came, and survival took over.
Looking back on both of those moments, I’m struck by how similar they were, even though the circumstances were completely different. In both cases, I was in real danger. In both cases, my conscious mind was terrified and didn’t know what to do. And in both cases, something deeper kicked in… some survival instinct that could see things my normal thinking couldn’t.
I’ve thought about it a lot over the years. What was that shift? Was it adrenaline? Was it some ancient part of the brain taking control? I don’t know. But I do know that in those moments, I wasn’t making decisions the way I normally do. It was faster, clearer, more instinctive.
And I know I was lucky. Both times, things could have gone very differently. I could have crashed into those cars on Kingsway. I could have fallen off that cliff in Glacier. But I didn’t. And I came away from both experiences with a strange kind of respect for what the human mind and body can do when they absolutely have to.
We did a lot of crazy things back in those days, especially in the park. We were young… 19, 20 years old… and we thought we were invincible. We’d go up on the ice fields without ropes, without ice axes, peering into crevasses and standing on snow bridges in the summer sun. Looking back, it was sheer stupidity. We didn’t really understand the danger we were in.
But I survived. And those two moments… when time slowed down and everything shifted… taught me something I’ve never forgotten: when it really matters, the human will to survive is an extraordinary thing.
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### **Story Editing Notes by Claude 4.5 Sonnet **
**Kept:**
- Every detail, event, and phrase from the original transcript for both stories.
- George’s authentic voice: reflective tone, conversational rhythm, understated humor (”the cat’s meow,” “Holy hell”), and natural pacing.
- The recurring motif of “time slowing down” and the survival instinct kicking in—central to both experiences.
- His self-awareness and humility about youthful recklessness.
**Cut:**
- Filler words (”you know,” “sort of,” “I guess”) and false starts.
- Minor repetitions about the Dodge Dart’s features and the seagull thesis (kept only what was necessary for context).
- Redundant phrasing about being “young and stupid.”
**Smoothed:**
- Added minimal, neutral transitions (”A few days later,” “The second time it happened,” “Looking back on both”) to bridge the two stories and create thematic unity.
- Organized into clear sections: Dart story, cliff story, and unified reflection.
✅
**Result:**
This amalgamated story is **fully transcript-faithful** and **voice-authentic**. It preserves George’s natural storytelling style while weaving two distinct near-death experiences into a unified narrative about survival, instinct, and the strange clarity that comes when everything is on the line.
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